I love how this poem contrasts the factory roof with the natural world. It’s powerful how the chick’s journey from the rooftop to the open sky symbolizes the search for freedom and a true home. The ending is so satisfying, with the chick finally finding peace by the ocean. It’s a great reminder of the difference between being confined and experiencing the vast, open world. Thanks for sharing!

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I'm a student, and my thoughts are grounded in scientific facts. I want to maintain this approach as I search for new insights.

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